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THROUGH THE ATLANTEAN SHORES by lombregrise



La vague du soir bleu

enlace le soleil

bientôt, la nuit s’allume -

les étoiles, pareil ;

et dans la belle l’écume

comme dans un manteau

elles coulent bientôt.

 

Une petite étoile

perdue dans les rouleaux

comme un marin sans voile

qui s’enfonce sous l’eau

demandait doucement

aux poissons un peu d’aide ;

mais d’un seul mouvement

ils partaient dans l’eau tiède.

 

Alors Dame la Vague,

comme une mère aimante,

prit la petite étoile

au creux de son cœur : « chante

pour moi, je te protège ! »

L’océan fut charmé

par l’étoile de neige

et voulut l’honorer.

 

Et c’est depuis ce temps

que l’écume et son chant

comme sur une toile

s’habillent tout de blanc

pour leur amie l’étoile.

 

Frantz, pour mon fils ;  07/08/2013.

:bulletblue: Un poème pour l'anniversaire de mon fils - 10 ans aujourd'hui !
:bulletgreen: A poem for my son's birthday - 10 years today!

:sun:

Artwork / Image by me

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:iconcatherinepeguet:
CatherinePeguet Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Magnifique !
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Professional Writer
merci !
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:iconcatherinepeguet:
CatherinePeguet Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
:-)
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:iconhypermagical:
hypermagical Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
:XD: Wonderful!
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Professional Writer
:heart:
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:iconhypermagical:
hypermagical Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
:iconheartlaplz:
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:iconninefiftin:
Ninefiftin Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
C'est tout mignon ^^ Ca sonne un peu comme un conte, j'adore :)
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Professional Writer
merci :heart:
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:icondameodessa:
DameOdessa Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
C'est adorable!:heart:
Bon anniversaire à ton mini-toi (très en retard... l'annif, pas ton fils hein ^^;):huggle:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Professional Writer
merci :rose: :heart:
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:icondameodessa:
DameOdessa Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:huggle:
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:iconfigueline:
figueline Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
Tout joli :rose:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Professional Writer
merci :heart:
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:iconfigueline:
figueline Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
Je t'en prie :rose:
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:iconbreamgappy:
breamgappy Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
Belles images :heart:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Professional Writer
merci :rose:
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:iconthe-mirrorball-man:
The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
C'est très beau, malicieux et habile, et d'une certaine manière ça me fait penser aux contes de Kipling.
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Professional Writer
merci beaucoup !
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:icondragonschest:
DragonsChest Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Professional Writer
Magnifique poésie mon ami ... :clap:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Professional Writer
merci david!
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:icondragonschest:
DragonsChest Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Professional Writer
Very welcome Frantz... :w00t:
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:icondelice1941:
Delice1941 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
Lovely birthday present Frantz:rose:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Professional Writer
merci :rose:
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:iconlucreziart:
Lucreziart Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ton fils a bien de la chance. Quelle tendresse !
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Professional Writer
merci !
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:iconpascal-prevost:
pascal-prevost Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
:clap:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Professional Writer
merci :)
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:iconnaikki:
naikki Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
Χρονια Πολλα κι ευτυχισμενα .. to the little reader of Homer! :)
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Professional Writer
Ήταν ευχάριστη θέση να διαβάσει το μήνυμά σας ! :sun:
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AyeAye12 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student Writer
<font><font class="">Tres bien! J'adore ce! </font></font>
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Professional Writer
merci !
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:iconfuzzyhoser:
FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Happy Birthday to your son! (:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you Rachel! 

I will note you a cheesy translation
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:iconfuzzyhoser:
FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh yes, please do! (:
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:icongruuumsh:
Gruuumsh Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
Tu vois, dès qu'on allonge un peu, on peut faire passer tellement de choses... superbe poème et heureux fiston. A part la première strophe que j'ai du lire trois fois, le reste est d'un fluide magistral et d'une beauté transportante, si j'ose dire.
Merci de nous avoir fait partager ce petit bout de bonheur.
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Professional Writer
merci :)
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:icontyphon-humanoid:
typhon-humanoid Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student General Artist
joyeux anniversaire à votre fils alors! =D
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Professional Writer
merci :D
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:icontsukiiyo:
Tsukiiyo Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Superbe ♥
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Professional Writer
:rose:
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:iconlethe--styx:
Lethe--Styx Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
Très joli poème, tout en douceur, qui se marie bien avec la photo...
Votre petit ange doit déjà être en route vers ses rêves bleus...

:rose:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Professional Writer
merci ! :rose:
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:iconkrukof2:
krukof2 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Professional
j'adore Conan .... :slow:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Professional Writer
:lol:
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:iconkrukof2:
krukof2 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Professional
et ce texte aussi :D
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Professional Writer
:D
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:iconannabelle-chabert:
Annabelle-Chabert Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013   Photographer
Pas possible qu'il n'aime pas :aww:
Si on m'écrivait un poème pareil je serais au anges !!!
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Professional Writer
merci :rose:

je te ferai une comptine alors
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Annabelle-Chabert Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013   Photographer
:aww:
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