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:bulletblue: Ma seconde collaboration avec :iconwordeea: Thème : les difficultés de la traduction - en partant d'un texte original Français par moi, une première traduction Anglaise classique par Sophie. Cette première traduction anglophone est ensuite passée par le filtre de Google Translate puis réarrangée par moi, cette seconde version francophone étant ensuite repassée dans Google Translate par Sophie et réarrangée par elle, etc. Au final, un résultat, disons, intéressant :lol:

:bulletgreen: My second collaborative work with :iconwordeea: Our theme: translation difficulties - We started with an original French text written by me, that Sophie adapted in her usual way. We then put that adapted English text into Google Translate and I rearranged/adapted it; this second French translation was then put through Google Translate once more by Sophie, and she then rearranged/adapted it, etc, etc. As you can see the end result, is, interesting, for lack of a better word :lol:

Qui a dit que Google translate n'était pas poète ? Who said that Google Translate didn't have poetic abilities? :#1:

Vous pouvez trouver sa version ici // You can find her version here:



Artwork by Sophie.
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:icondragonschest:
DragonsChest Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Professional Writer
A fantastic collab :clap:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Professional Writer
thank you !
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:icondragonschest:
DragonsChest Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Professional Writer
:iconlittle-cats::iconwelcome1plz::iconwelcome2plz::iconwelcome3plz::iconwelcome4plz:
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:icontoxic-nebulae:
toxic-nebulae Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Student Writer
very appropriate for a piece about difficulties in translation to be in two languages
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Professional Writer
thank you :)
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:icondelice1941:
Delice1941 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
Goggle did not let you down here, I enjoyed all the images you, Sophie and google created. Some memorable lines.
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Professional Writer
Merci - Mercy - Pitié - Pity- Pythie - :lol:
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:icondelice1941:
Delice1941 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012
Hello Frantz, am smiling as I write this, feel sure you will be laughing at my attempt to read this obscure sentence: here goes.

Pythie De Delphes, the oracle is asked for pity and mercy, then thanked. Thought about this, it is the only explanation I can think of.
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Professional Writer
excellent :lol:
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:iconthedarkenedbride:
TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
really cool poem! Google tends to be funny...
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Professional Writer
:lol: thx :)
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:iconthedarkenedbride:
TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome :iconrosesplz:
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:iconninefiftin:
Ninefiftin Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
J'ajoute que j'ai un faible pour "Au solde du temps, le requin alerte la naïade" :D
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Professional Writer
:#1:
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:iconninefiftin:
Ninefiftin Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconpineapplelaplz:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Professional Writer
:D
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:iconninefiftin:
Ninefiftin Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Comme je l'ai dit à Wordeea, encore une collab super intéressante et bien écrite, malgré les coups vaches du facétieux Google translate ^^ J'adore, je suis fan :B
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Professional Writer
merci :rose:
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:iconninefiftin:
Ninefiftin Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: !
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:iconhalcyonshores:
halcyonshores Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful work. Bravo to you both. :rose:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Professional Writer
:) thx lady :rose:
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:iconrednihao:
RedNihao Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Mon ordi doit buguer... Là où il devrait y avoir une image, il n'y a que du vide :(
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Professional Writer
mise à jour d'acrobat - c'est un pdf :)
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:iconrednihao:
RedNihao Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
ça maaaarche ^^
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Professional Writer
:#1:
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:iconthe-mirrorball-man:
The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Vous êtes une belle bande de dingues! You are a beautiful band of lunatics! Vous êtes un beau bandage de lunatiques!

Sérieusement on pourrait consacrer une thèse à la manière dont l'intervention de la machine ajoute un facteur aléatoire et construit/détruit l'intention poétique. Ça va me tourner dans la tête pendant un bout de temps.
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:iconwordeea:
Wordeea Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:rofl:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Professional Writer
:boogie: c'est rigolo hein :lol:
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:iconthe-mirrorball-man:
The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
C'est étourdissant! :faint:
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:iconnahuask:
Nahuask Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Surprenant!
Bravo pour l'idée et l'ensemble
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Professional Writer
merci :love:
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:iconnahuask:
Nahuask Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
:]
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:icondani0994:
Dani0994 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
I like it :)
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Professional Writer
thank you :)
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:iconsylveryfox:
SylveryFox Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
En conclusion, à la fin on a du québecois.
Coooooool Google Trad :p

:rofl:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Professional Writer
:rofl:
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:iconsylveryfox:
SylveryFox Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:icongizmoplz:
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:iconwordeea:
Wordeea Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
pffffffffff :lol:
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:iconsylveryfox:
SylveryFox Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
C'est l'effet que ça me fait! :nana:
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:iconwordeea:
Wordeea Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
[link]

gnagnagna ;p
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:iconsylveryfox:
SylveryFox Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
pfou ... trop bon! j'écoute ça le matin avant d'aller au boulot ... quand j'arrive, je suis à fond!
:excited:..........:typerhappy:...............:crash:..........:iconrockonplz:
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:iconwordeea:
Wordeea Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:lol: c'est, selon moi, leur meilleur album. rosewood devrait faire des reprises de bosstones :D et tu filmes que je puisse voir :boogie:
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:iconsylveryfox:
SylveryFox Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
On n'a pas de sax ... et je vois mal Virg (la chanteuse) avec cette voix :D
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:iconwordeea:
Wordeea Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
trouvez-en un :#1: ;p elle a l'énergie pour par contre :nod: de ce que j'ai vu, en tous cas
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