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LA-BAS / OVER THERE (poetry) by lombregrise LA-BAS / OVER THERE (poetry) by lombregrise

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:new: thanks a lot for the DD, suggested & featured by lady ^Beccalicious :rose:

:bulletblue: ma première collaboration avec la noble et merveilleuse

:iconhalcyonshores:

Texte inspiré par la photo de l'excellente

:iconannabelle-chabert: (avec sa gracieuse permission)

Le poème est présenté en français et en anglais. Ma partie est en bleu, celle de *halcyonshores en rouge. Nous avons chacun traduit le texte de l'autre.


:bulletgreen: This is my first collaboration with the noble and talented

:iconhalcyonshores:

who was inspired by the incredible image of

:iconannabelle-chabert: (used here with her kind permission).

Presenting our work in English and French (translations by us). My poetry in blue, *halcyonshores's poetry in red.



Ici /here the *halcyonshores's version [link] read it and leave her a comment :rose:

Ici/here the *Annabelle-Chabert's original image - leave her a comment
:rose:

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Given 2012-12-17
LA-BAS / OVER THERE (poetry) by *lombregrise A wonderful piece of collaborative work both beautifully crafted in French and English. Collaborated with *halcyonshores ( Featured by BeccaJS )
:iconla-tete-ailleurs:
La-Tete-Ailleurs Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
Superbe ! Je découvre seulement maintenant ce bijou. Ça mériterait 3 DD, une pour chacun(e) de vous.
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Professional Writer
merci !
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:icontickersymbol:
tickersymbol Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your work is most inspiring and beautifully humbling. I love the innate rhythm the two of you share here.
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Professional Writer
thank you :rose:
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:iconmeggie272:
Meggie272 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is breathtaking. I honestly cannot offer anything else to say but that, I'm blown away by the beauty of it.
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Professional Writer
Thanks a lot :rose:
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:iconbeyondjen:
BeyondJen Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful words you two put together. :heart:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Professional Writer
thank you :rose:
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:iconbeyondjen:
BeyondJen Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure!
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:iconthatfunnierpiece:
ThatFunnierPiece Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
There's something here I haven't seen yet - two views, and it's somewhat soothing. Collaborations are a powerful thing indeed. How you have shown both sides of the story - it's eliminating uncertainty, and speaking of things gone.
But it's rambling up here. I adore the tale.
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you :) She is a great poetess.
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:iconmoonabluesky:
MoonaBluesky Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Simplement magnifique. Des paysages couleur pastel défilent devant mes yeux à la lecture de ces quelques vers, et tandis que je m'apprête à observer plus clairement, voilà qu'ils disparaissent, laissant la place à d'autres apparitions furtives et brumeuses...

L'image, elle, m'inspire un sentiment de solitude apaisée, j'ai la sensation de regarder au plus profond de mon esprit dans ces moments où il n'est pas agité par le torrent des pensées. Et, alors que je regarde plus attentivement, j'entends le bruit léger de la pluie, il m'isole du reste du monde, du temps, rendant au moment présent sa nature infinie.

Merci pour ce petit moment de pur bonheur.
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Professional Writer
merci à toi pour le commentaire :rose:
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:icondameodessa:
DameOdessa Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:glomp:Félicitations pour cette nouvelle DD bien méritée, cher ami :clap::dance:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Professional Writer
:kiss:
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:icongargoylesblood:
GargoylesBlood Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:shamrock: "Congrats on the DD!" :shamrock: :)
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Professional Writer
thank you :)
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:iconmonicadrueco:
monicadrueco Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
Great picture. How did you take this picture?
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Professional Writer
the picture is made by :iconannabelle-chabert: - The poetry is written by :iconhalcyonshores: and me :)
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:iconnnyornieorknee:
NnyorNieorKnee Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's marvelous, and really pretty~
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Professional Writer
thank you :)
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:iconhasakitsuki:
Hasakitsuki Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
J'en reste sans voix... C'est magnifique. Votre poème m'a coupé le souffle et m'a emmenée très loin pendant un instant...
Sincères félicitations.
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Professional Writer
merci beaucoup :rose:
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:iconschnarre:
schnarre Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
...Very inspiring!
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Professional Writer
thank you :)
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:iconannabelle-chabert:
Annabelle-Chabert Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012   Photographer
Tous mes compliments pour la Daily deviation :clap:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Professional Writer
et merci à toi pour cette photo sublime qui nous a donné l'inspiration :rose:
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:iconannabelle-chabert:
Annabelle-Chabert Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012   Photographer
Nous avons cartonnés héhé :woohoo:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Professional Writer
:lol:
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:iconastrangeallure:
astrangeallure Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahhhhhhhhhh, Wow. :D It's so beautiful...I will have a perpetual smile on my face today...you both did a phenomenal job...I cannot believe I had not read that yet...it's at the top of your page!!! Sorry. :D I'm sure there is a reason for it....but the universe hasn't revealed it as of yet. :D

I particularly loved this part:

There, the joys are intimate, stream-washed linens, and the evening infinite

Here, traveling waves sing for me lullabies, of rebel paths, I  cannot follow

And, of course, the wonderful end....okay, I loved all of it. :lol: :love:

Oh, and Congrats!! :heart:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Professional Writer
thank you :rose: :sun:
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:iconastrangeallure:
astrangeallure Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very welcome. :heart: :D
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:iconoctocolombus:
Octocolombus Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Bravo à toi et :iconhalcyonshores: :)
DD bien méritée ;)
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Professional Writer
merci beaucoup !
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:iconoctocolombus:
Octocolombus Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Je t'en prie :)
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:iconskyline46:
Skyline46 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
WOW
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Professional Writer
thank you :)
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:iconskyline46:
Skyline46 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
no problem... :) keep in touch
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:iconlintu47:
lintu47 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the DD! :heart:
Have a nice day! : )
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Professional Writer
thank you :)
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:iconlintu47:
lintu47 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure :happybounce:
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:iconhalcyonshores:
halcyonshores Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So happy and proud I am...
Congratulations to you!!!! :clap::clap::clap:
:iconwhiteheartplz:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Professional Writer
:heart: would you say congrats to US, lady, ;) :rose:
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:iconhalcyonshores:
halcyonshores Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:tighthug:

True, all three of us, but today YOU are the Star ;):heart:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Professional Writer
lol a star of shadow :evillaugh:
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:iconhalcyonshores:
halcyonshores Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You may choose the shadows, Noble Monsieur, but in this case
you surely did deserve the 'trophy' and the (spot)light, and I mean
that with all my heart.
:iconheartwhiteplz:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Professional Writer
:rose:
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:iconmijophia:
Mijophia Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
Ah, sa fesait longtemps que je n'avais plus lis un texte en français sur DA! J'aime énormément ce poeme, gros bravo à vous et félicitation pour votre Daily Deviation :clap:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Professional Writer
merci ! :)
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:iconkarinta:
Karinta Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Almost otherworldly.
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