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(english translation below)


L'ombre III


Et la lune s'écroule
En fragments de feu froid
Choyé par les abysses
Mon joli néant
Blond


Frantz, Novembre 2011.


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Shadow III


And the moon collapsing
In fragments of cold fire
Indulged by abysses
My pretty nil
Golden


Frantz, November 2011.
:iconlombregrise:
:bulletblue: Recherches sur l'ombre et l'oubli III - sentences et poème court. Anniversaire -1 de l'oubli (Atlantide en novembre).

:bulletgreen: Research on shade and oblivion III - in short sentence. -1 Anniversary of oblivion (Atlantis in November).

English translation for my friends by me and my sister joode.

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:iconall-my-darkness:
After reading your work with Halycon
I see a pattern of coldness, maybe insight
into the set ways of things that numbs a person.

Despite this thier is clear hope as the piece progresses
to accpet the abysses and end with the gold, the color
of wealth and yet represented a shinying example of
what should be appreciated outright.

More clear thoughts and imagery here.
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*lombregrise Dec 8, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you again :) the gold is here, unfortunately, the color of a sort of "shinning death". I'm very happy that the translations can give me some different advice (not only in french.) It's a unexpected experience :)
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:iconall-my-darkness:
Interesting that you say that.

Sinks in to consider it. Gold usually represents wealth and status.

To use it as the opposite works for me exactly because of what it brings that way.

You don't need to be poor to appreciate life but I have found it (when experienced)
to certainly helped!
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*lombregrise Dec 9, 2012  Professional Writer
:)
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:iconanemathenae:
Joli néant BLOND... sublime!
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*lombregrise Oct 21, 2012  Professional Writer
:heart:
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*Hermetic-Wings Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I wish I can take photos as beautiful as your poems...I felt so extra ordinary feelings while I was trying to get into your world. It is so special :clap:
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*lombregrise Jan 9, 2012  Professional Writer
very honored.
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:iconhermetic-wings:
*Hermetic-Wings Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
>You are so welcome :D
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~Marie-Em Nov 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Une belle image pour un jolie poème, j'aime beaucoup :)!
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