FROM DUST (poetry)

My first collaboration with mademoiselle



With her fantastic pic "From Dust"



English first : because I thought the poem directly in english. The french text is the translation from the original. That's why I have requested a critique, if someone is kind enough to tell me if its sound well, or not.

"calm-dark" mood try this [link]
"wrath-dark" mood try this [link]

*figueline n'ouvre surtout pas le second lien...