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FROM DUST (poetry) by lombregrise FROM DUST (poetry) by lombregrise

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:bulletgreen: My first collaboration with mademoiselle

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With her fantastic pic "From Dust"



English first : because I thought the poem directly in english. The french text is the translation from the original. That's why I have requested a critique, if someone is kind enough to tell me if its sound well, or not.

:music: "calm-dark" mood try this [link]
:music: "wrath-dark" mood try this [link]

*figueline n'ouvre surtout pas le second lien...
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Minidarkcalibur89 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013
Joli !
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Professional Writer
merci !
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Nahuask Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Résurrection de l'ombre
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Professional Writer
:heart:
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Stolvezen Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Je ne puis résister aux charmes enténébrés de ces mots :heart:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Professional Writer
merci beaucoup :rose:
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:iconstolvezen:
Stolvezen Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
C'est toujours un plaisir :hug:
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ThatFunnierPiece Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
I can't help but ponder on the meaning, and realistically so. Crushing the clarity of winter, birth from the dust - it reminds me of rebirth, yet then there are "dusk's shadows", something reminiscent of an end. Or is it birth of - something akin to winter solstice, or coldest days?
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lombregrise Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Professional Writer
free interpretation - for me, it came from the pic. As a forgotten goddess... Thank you!
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:clap: you sir... are amazing!

Bien! magnifique!!
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