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Tes yeux clairs d'eau froide
Seront des tombeaux
Devant mon corps roide
Cerclé de flambeaux

Éphémère marbre
Léché d'ombres d'or
Verras-tu notre arbre
Sec et déjà mort

Tes larmes de glace
Arrivent trop tard
Dans ce temps qui passe
Qui passe blafard

Scellant le silence
Tu n'as jamais su
Mes envies de danse
De miel et de nu

Tes yeux clairs de lune
Mon cœur de géant
Mêlés d'infortune
Au creux du néant


Frantz, mars 2012.


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Your clear, cold water's eyes
Will be graves
In front of my rigid body
Circled by torchlight

Ephemeral marble
Licked by golden shadows
Will you see our tree
Dry and already dead

Your icy tears
Come too late
In this passing time
Passing, ashen like

Sealing the silence
You never knew
My cravings for nude
And honey dances

Your moon lit eyes
My giant's heart
Tangled in misfortune
In nothingness' hollow


Frantz, march 2012
Comptine II - 5 quatrains de 5 pieds. (Comptine : rien de complexe ou à sur-interpréter)

Correction : derniers vers. Meilleur comme ça.

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A translation made by me - not sure. But corrected, re-arranged and finalized by :iconpupil-in-denial: sounds better now. Thx :rose:

Correction : last line - better.

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:iconlndfrance:
LNDFrance Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Je crois que celui-ci est mon préféré.
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Professional Writer
merci ! :rose:
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LNDFrance Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
De rien =)
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DameOdessa Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Superbe! :)
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Professional Writer
merci - celui-ci j'en suis assez content ! :rose:
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DameOdessa Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:nod:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Professional Writer
c'est le retour de mes :iconghostlyplz:
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DameOdessa Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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SnowNightFall Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Student Photographer
Wow :) C'est si beau, j'adore tellement :D Je comprends les deux langues, mais j'ai toujours préféré les sons de mots dans le Francais :D Super super super!
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Professional Writer
merci :rose:
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asymmetrical-wings Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing :)
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Professional Writer
thanks - i like this one :rose:
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:iconasymmetrical-wings:
asymmetrical-wings Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:) cool
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Le-Papillon-57 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
J'aime beaucoup, c'est très agréable à lire quoique mélancolique... Mais ce qui est mélancolique est si beau :heart:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Professional Writer
merci :rose:
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Stolvezen Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Une petite merveille sculpté dans un cristal de lune au tintement d'or pâle :heart:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Professional Writer
très touché, merci !
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Stolvezen Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:aww:
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christianross75 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
J'apprend beaucoup de tes poèmes. Moi qui suis que néophytes encore dans ce domaine.
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lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Professional Writer
eh bien merci
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HopeSwings777 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
The pain is real. I love the word choices. Fine work!
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Professional Writer
merci !
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Professional Writer
I love it Frantz... :thumbsup:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Professional Writer
merci!
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:iconfigueline:
figueline Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012
Très beau :rose:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Professional Writer
:heart:
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tairfeu Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012
un poignant après
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Professional Writer
merci
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Wordeea Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
eeeet BAM!

Scellant le silence
Tu n'as jamais su
Mes envies de danse
De miel et de nu

Tes yeux clairs de lune
Mon cœur de géant
Mêlés d'infortune
Boivent le néant.
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lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Professional Writer
:rose:
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NOBODY-KNOW-MY-NAME Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
WOW WOW WOW ...et je ne parle pas du jeu :) j'adore...c'est beau, beau, beau.
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lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Professional Writer
merci :lol:
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The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
J'aime beaucoup. Le premier quatrain en particulier.
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Professional Writer
merci infiniment - c'est un impromptu.
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drolebouillon Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nice !
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Professional Writer
ur welcome patate :lol:
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drolebouillon Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry, what's a "patate" ?
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Professional Writer
it's a french matter for the frites !!
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Wordeea Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:lol:
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lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Professional Writer
ehhehehehe (is my english version correct ?)
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:iconwordeea:
Wordeea Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i'll note you later :)
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