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Tes yeux clairs d'eau froide
Seront des tombeaux
Devant mon corps roide
Cerclé de flambeaux

Éphémère marbre
Léché d'ombres d'or
Verras-tu notre arbre
Sec et déjà mort

Tes larmes de glace
Arrivent trop tard
Dans ce temps qui passe
Qui passe blafard

Scellant le silence
Tu n'as jamais su
Mes envies de danse
De miel et de nu

Tes yeux clairs de lune
Mon cœur de géant
Mêlés d'infortune
Au creux du néant


Frantz, mars 2012.


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Your clear, cold water's eyes
Will be graves
In front of my rigid body
Circled by torchlight

Ephemeral marble
Licked by golden shadows
Will you see our tree
Dry and already dead

Your icy tears
Come too late
In this passing time
Passing, ashen like

Sealing the silence
You never knew
My cravings for nude
And honey dances

Your moon lit eyes
My giant's heart
Tangled in misfortune
In nothingness' hollow


Frantz, march 2012
Comptine II - 5 quatrains de 5 pieds. (Comptine : rien de complexe ou à sur-interpréter)

Correction : derniers vers. Meilleur comme ça.

:skull:

A translation made by me - not sure. But corrected, re-arranged and finalized by :iconpupil-in-denial: sounds better now. Thx :rose:

Correction : last line - better.

:skull:
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LNDFrance Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Je crois que celui-ci est mon préféré.
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lombregrise Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Professional Writer
merci ! :rose:
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LNDFrance Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
De rien =)
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DameOdessa Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Superbe! :)
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lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Professional Writer
merci - celui-ci j'en suis assez content ! :rose:
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DameOdessa Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:nod:
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lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Professional Writer
c'est le retour de mes :iconghostlyplz:
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DameOdessa Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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SnowNightFall Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Student Photographer
Wow :) C'est si beau, j'adore tellement :D Je comprends les deux langues, mais j'ai toujours préféré les sons de mots dans le Francais :D Super super super!
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lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Professional Writer
merci :rose:
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